SUBJECT: Screenplay - only if you have time
If you have a minute, but ONLY if you have a minute, I’d be honored if you could look it over. Some people HATE reading and if that’s you, don’t worry. But you do have a lead part. (Don’t worry, you are disguised.)
SUBJECT: Re: Screenplay - only if you have time
This is really outside my area of expertise. I gave it a quick read and everything is basically correct.
I am a software engineer, hired by the client to build a simple site. The 17-page screenplay featured me as an antagonist named “The Boss,” telling a child in a candy shop she wasn’t allowed to have more than 5 pieces of candy.